I've written some fiction that I'm planning to add soon, once my linked website is up and running. Maybe it's good, maybe it's bad, I have no idea. What will crush me is getting advice like yours, unasked for. So your attitude and approach worries me to be honest. Considering you're a writer here who is involved with Medium DM channels, I'm surprised at your lack of self-awarenesss. Thanks for the warning I guess.

Edit — my bad, you said there aren’t any DM channels. But you can private message or email him. Or just not give advice when it’s unasked for.